Love You?

I said I love you!
I soon knew my mistake.
I want to take it back
But it was never mine to say!

I just wished that you 
would feel the same.
Your the reason why my skies
were not so gray.

All that is lost now
and I just have to go
I can't beileve it
but all along i should've known.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Orozco Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 9:03 AM
beautiful piece i really enjoyed it thanks for sharing!-edward
Torbenson Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 10:35 AM
sad i can relate to what this poem has to say everyone can it may seem that way for while but youll find the guy of your dreams some day dont give up... good writtin keep it up
G Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 3:45 PM
your skies wont stay gray forever
Sings Avatar
January 6, 2010 at 6:35 AM
James, you make my heart sing with every word of everything you say and write. Your are very sweet and btw thanks for the friend request on Facebook. And you are also I wonderful Poet. Reading your poetry is one of the things that makes my heart sing!!!
Smith Avatar
January 5, 2010 at 11:48 AM
Sounds like you are hurting alot... feel better luv. There is tons of guys that could treat you better, and the world is small.
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