Deepak A. Poet Verse

Love Without Hope Is a Crime

my heart is making a beautiful rhyme,

may be love without hope is a crime.

my love is not an ivory tusk,

I love you from very dawn to dusk...





Date:
03/30/2016.

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Skat A July 1, 2016 at 8:49 AM Another awesome winning write ....Skat

Poet Destroyer A April 6, 2016 at 11:31 PM Deepak, Congrats on your "Love Without Hope" win ... LINDA Deepak A. April 13, 2016 at 4:21 PM Thanks Linda :)

Teddy Kimathi April 4, 2016 at 3:54 AM Awesome rhymes!!! Congrats, Deepak, for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-) Deepak A. April 4, 2016 at 10:08 AM thanks alot Teddy

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 2, 2016 at 12:30 AM Congrats on great win with this lovely write Deepak.. Deepak A. April 2, 2016 at 1:34 AM Thank you so much Upma...

Sara Kendrick April 1, 2016 at 8:03 AM Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “Love Without Hope” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara I liked the rhythm and flow in this one.. Deepak A. April 2, 2016 at 1:35 AM Thankd alot Sara.

Hansteven Selfa April 1, 2016 at 7:57 AM This is so brilliant Deepak! Truly a great work! Congratulations! I hope I'll furthermore see beautiful works like this! :) -HANS Deepak A. April 2, 2016 at 1:36 AM Thank you