Raj Napal Poet Rhyme

Love Without Hope, a Parted Petal

Parted petal from flower’s bloom
Drifts in breeze of last summer’s dream.
Lost without hope in distant shore’s gloom.
Love now drowns in depths of sea's stream.

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Poet Destroyer A April 6, 2016 at 11:43 PM Raj Napal, Congrats on your "Love Without Hope" win ... LINDA Raj Napal April 8, 2016 at 9:17 PM Thanks for your praise.

Teddy Kimathi April 4, 2016 at 4:18 AM An amazingly crafted metaphorical verse!!! Congrats Raj, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-) Raj Napal April 8, 2016 at 9:16 PM Thanks for your words.

Shirley Rebstock April 3, 2016 at 3:24 PM Can picture the lost petal. Enjoyed. Raj Napal April 8, 2016 at 9:16 PM Thanks so much.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 2, 2016 at 1:35 AM Congrats on great win with this lovely write Raj.. Raj Napal April 2, 2016 at 10:47 AM Thanks a lot and congratulations on your entry too.

Sara Kendrick April 1, 2016 at 3:46 PM Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “Love Without Hope” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara Raj Napal April 2, 2016 at 10:44 AM Thanks a lot for your appreciation of this little poem.

Hansteven Selfa April 1, 2016 at 7:54 AM This is so brilliant Raj! Truly a great work! Congratulations! I hope I'll furthermore see beautiful works like this! :) -HANS Raj Napal April 2, 2016 at 10:43 AM I really appreciate your enjoyment of this little poem. All the best.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2016 at 9:22 AM - Touching and beautifully written, Raj - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Raj Napal March 29, 2016 at 12:54 PM Thanks for your kind words.

Susan Palli March 29, 2016 at 8:44 AM Oh so sad. Good one for the contest! Raj Napal March 29, 2016 at 12:54 PM Thanks so much, I enjoyed writing this.