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Love With a Dream

I fell in love with a dream. She the light all but I got to see. But me I fell in love with a dream. Doling small portions yet never all of her free. I fell in love with this dream. Which was never nor ever to be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/13/2016 11:11:00 PM
t.r, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/4/2009 1:24:00 PM
This is pretty - something like Poe would write.. like reaching out for something that you cannot quite grasp.. wonderful imagery.
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Date: 2/4/2009 12:55:00 PM
I like the imagery imposed in this, the emotions of a love that will never be, I think alot could relate to this, a thought provolking poem, good work. Judy Riley
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