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Love With a Dream

I fell in love with a dream. She the light all but I got to see. But me I fell in love with a dream. Doling small portions yet never all of her free. I fell in love with this dream. Which was never nor ever to be.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 6/7/2024 11:24:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/13/2016 11:11:00 PM

t.r, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Valerie Bellefleur

Date: 2/4/2009 1:24:00 PM

This is pretty - something like Poe would write.. like reaching out for something that you cannot quite grasp.. wonderful imagery.

Judy Riley

Date: 2/4/2009 12:55:00 PM

I like the imagery imposed in this, the emotions of a love that will never be, I think alot could relate to this, a thought provolking poem, good work. Judy Riley