Love Warm Rain-Hiku-14

Written: June 3, 2025, For contest by Brian Strand

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       r       d                              f
     a           r      on      my     a     e
       i        o                              c
          n p
            s 

love's 
        w_a_r_m_t_h    a
                                   w
                                       a
                                          k
                                              e
                                                  n
                                                      s    my         h
                                                                      e      a
                                                                       r /\  t


nature's    s      w
                e      e         re |  f  |  rain |
                    t                  o      o       o     
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Buhagiar Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 2:22 AM
Hope I'll have my cataract operation soon. Great h a i k u :) Best for a win.
Hind Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 1:04 PM
Lovely!
Empress Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 4:54 AM
Ah natures refrain does awaken ones heart and warms ones soul too! I love the creative nature youve done this hiku! I remember when i first got on soup seeing you do shape poems, you do them very well dr sotto! Exquisitely delivered! Pleasure visiting your page today! Sending you light and warm wishes for the contest!
Andresen Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 2:25 AM
- Well written in creativity, Las...good luck in ithe contest :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 10:43 PM
A fun read, Sotto. Wish I could get a simple swirl to stay in place when I try this kind of thing
Blown Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 6:18 PM
when very young i watched my first hurricane......fell in love with the weather ......len
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