Richard Palmer Poet Rhyme

Love Vs Hate

Through the lens of a scope,hate watches,
Bam,bam,on the butt,two more notches,
In front of their eyes,life flashes,
The weak at heart,it snatches,
A mustard seed to a melon it grows,
Slowly but surely,engulfing souls,
Cold as snow,consuming flesh like crows,
Demolishing friendship,constructing foes,
Bursting hells door,into our world hate pours,
In the heart of evil,hate soars,
Knocking the LORD,children doors,
TRYING to conquer GODS' Kingdom,from shore to shore,
GOD stretch out his hands,flowing galore,
Love is the challenger,Love is the cure,
Love is the victor,hate no more..... 


{Trying} is capitalised intentionally....

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Robin Davis July 6, 2014 at 2:03 PM Richard Hate, anger, prejudice and racism are things this world needs to stop or the future will not shine brightly with love and hope. Thank you for the awesome comment on my Where's The Peace poem. Richard Palmer July 6, 2014 at 7:28 PM thanks Robin,they are sinking the world with negative actions,you are welcome

Janet Muthoni November 30, 2012 at 8:14 AM Awesome Richard....:-) Richard Palmer November 30, 2012 at 8:31 AM thanks Janet,nice having you

Richard Lamoureux November 14, 2012 at 4:05 PM Well written and expressed. Ghandi said that fear was the true enemy we think it is hate but it is fear. I do not know the exact words of his quote but it is an intresting thought to ponder. I guess out of the seeds of fear hate can grow. I like your style Richard, keep them coming, your poems can be a instrument of healing. Richard Palmer November 15, 2012 at 4:04 PM thanks Richard,hope they do

Patrice Edwards September 1, 2012 at 5:33 PM This is beautiful the way you end it brought a peice in me that leads me to forgive. Richard Palmer September 1, 2012 at 6:02 PM thank you Patrice,you should

Omojevwe Emmanuel Brown July 18, 2012 at 6:42 AM Great work. I love it. But where is real love? when every one us including pastors are now lovers of money than soul winning. Great work. Nice to read your work. Richard Palmer July 18, 2012 at 7:02 AM thanks Pastor,real love is in the hearts of good men with great intention,lets keep fighting

Russell Sivey July 17, 2012 at 9:47 PM This is a fabulous write Richard! It does have a different outcome than my poem 'World of Hate'! I do like the positive twist to this at the end, very refreshing! The entire poem is wonderful, Great Work!! Richard Palmer July 17, 2012 at 10:39 PM thanks much Russell,great writer yourself

Shans Priya July 2, 2012 at 12:54 AM real fact richard....nice allitration..i like it... Richard Palmer July 2, 2012 at 2:39 PM thank you Shans

Susan Palli June 28, 2012 at 10:49 AM loved it!!! soon to be reality Richard Palmer June 28, 2012 at 11:46 AM I know,feel it in my bones,thanks Susan

Laurel Larison June 27, 2012 at 8:06 AM That is a great write. Wonderfully written. Great job my friend. laurel Richard Palmer June 27, 2012 at 10:30 AM thanks Laurel

Keith Relf June 12, 2012 at 12:53 PM ahh that a great one.... is that all of it? Richard Palmer June 12, 2012 at 10:06 PM yep until I feel like writing,hate vs love,lol,thanks Keith,keep reading

Kasim Ishmael June 11, 2012 at 7:20 PM my friend richard all we need is love in this world,but our leaders don,t want love because how will they start wars ,i hope you do listen to my idol bob marley music a man who open ours to love and peace but sadly he was taken but we are the ones to say to younger ones,we can change this world together because you are the future and all you need is one love for all Richard Palmer June 11, 2012 at 11:41 PM Bob Marley is a favourite of mine,we have good taste,thanks Kasim

Trudy Diane Rider June 11, 2012 at 6:50 PM Wonderful sentiment, well written and expressed...I enjoyed it very much. Thank you also for your welcomed comments. ~Trudy~ Richard Palmer June 11, 2012 at 11:40 PM thanks Trudy

Karen Deeks June 11, 2012 at 6:43 PM A real nice write on the comfort religion brings... tyvm for sharing.... karen Richard Palmer June 11, 2012 at 11:39 PM I think so too,Karen

Lisa Cooper June 11, 2012 at 4:53 PM another fine pen Richard! Richard Palmer June 11, 2012 at 11:37 PM thank you Lisa

Asheka Collins June 11, 2012 at 1:20 PM Stunning love will win if we let it. Thanks for reminding us...A Richard Palmer June 11, 2012 at 1:50 PM lets all team up and make sure love wins,thanks Asheka

Michael Smith June 11, 2012 at 12:16 PM Like how wrote this. Each verse cascading into the next. Might I suggest last line hate nevermore? Richard Palmer June 11, 2012 at 12:26 PM thanks for the suggest,thanks Michael

Ravindra K Kapoor June 11, 2012 at 8:30 AM "Love is the challenger, Love is the cure, Love is the victor, hate no more..."Beautifully concluded lines. Ultimately it is love which wins ... Beautiful write my friend and thank you for your kind words on my Poem. Love and best wishes...Ravindra...RICHARD PALMER Richard Palmer June 11, 2012 at 9:13 AM thanks Ravindra,love is the cure...

Dinda Minardi June 11, 2012 at 7:57 AM A very wonderful message, Richard. But both will stay enemies until the time is through. Richard Palmer June 11, 2012 at 8:19 AM thanks Dinda, more love ,less hate

Nikita Lempadi June 11, 2012 at 7:14 AM Wow thats great, hope to learn from you, Also like the chicken Richard Palmer June 11, 2012 at 8:18 AM hope we learn from each other,thanks Nikita, cluck,cluck

Philip Souza June 11, 2012 at 6:43 AM Wow, Great Read,Loved It ! Richard Palmer June 11, 2012 at 8:17 AM thanks Philip

Anthony Nutter June 11, 2012 at 5:31 AM Love the write from beginning to end. Love does conquer all. Richard Palmer June 11, 2012 at 6:05 AM thanks Dan,in the midst of so much hate,love is the answer

Dan Kearley June 10, 2012 at 11:44 PM Nice write here Richard,I like the deepness of it...Oh,I thought I'd let ya know I'm thinking about using your words to finish my collab... :o) I just need to make sure they fit just right...I think they do? Thanks for sending them..Very nice! Richard Palmer June 11, 2012 at 6:04 AM thank you Dan,I thought the flip side would be nice,liked how your piece led me,think they will fit just right,thanks again for your inspiring comment....

Elizabeth Wesley June 10, 2012 at 10:05 PM Hi Richard, this is certainly a passionate write that reaches out to challeng all of us who seem to be lost. Love certainly works wonders when applied in theway you describe here. I enjoyed this and thank you for your sweet comments!:) Richard Palmer June 10, 2012 at 10:45 PM thanks Elizabeth,love your poetry

Carma Sanderson June 10, 2012 at 2:38 PM "This was beautiful Richard, loved the story that your soul poured out here. Carma" Richard Palmer June 10, 2012 at 9:24 PM thanks Carla,gonna let it pour a little more,oxoxox

Sara Kendrick June 10, 2012 at 12:40 PM Hate will eat a person alive for sure..Love is the definite cure..People need loving the most when they are deserving it the least..Enjoyed reading your creative work.. Richard Palmer June 10, 2012 at 12:55 PM thanks Sara,keep reading,love,Richie

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