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Love Upon a Mountaintop

(the story of a destined love) 4/3/13 The castle stood on a mountain so high, that its tips touched the sky And as she ran across the field, every fiber of her being she could feel. The excitement building up in her like a thunder storm cloud Ready to explode “ and her love would begin to unfold.” Struggling to climb up that steep hill, with just her determination and her will. Breathlessly she scrambled with her hands and feet Just to reach that mountainous peak With her fingertips torn and bruised, “ but this was a fight she would not lose.” Reaching the top of the mountain the ground leveled off Her determination the “queen “her heart the “boss”. She walked towards the castle and the draw bridge came down And the doors swung open, where thousands of hearts were found. She walked in amongst clapping and cheers, as her heart melted And lost any fears. There in the center of this beautiful chamber stood the man of her desires Who from a distance had lit up her fires? They walked towards each other with outstretched arms and gleams in their eyes Their searches were over as their hearts opened wide.

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Date: 4/3/2013 11:32:00 AM
Louis, this is a beautiful poem ..... one of the best I've read today!! - Thank you! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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