Jeremy Siedlecki Poet Haiku

Love Under Glass

Love Under Glass

I'm tired of believing
that love is all it takes
as I keep apologizing
and make the same mistakes
a heart has many pieces
for easy are its breaks
do not hold to tightly
be in absence does it ache
teardrops fall in puddles
slowly turning into lakes
which somehow quench the fire
that once burned down Heaven's gates

shadow of darkness
endowed with Hells passion
releasing the slaves

By: Jeremy Siedlecki

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Sara Kendrick March 30, 2011 at 3:28 PM Interesting work..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta March 30, 2011 at 7:09 AM Creative and interesting write, jeremy

Carol Sunshine Brown March 30, 2011 at 5:11 AM Enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetry this morning Jeremy. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 29, 2011 at 8:50 PM Lovely lines Jeremy expressing pain and heartache but also the beauty of luv too.. keep trying and when u least expect it ..luv shows up luv.. enjoyed your creativity tonight ...

Nicole Hawkins March 29, 2011 at 6:33 PM very detailed, powerful write, Jeremy. Nicely done -Nicole