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Love Under Glass

Love Under Glass I'm tired of believing that love is all it takes as I keep apologizing and make the same mistakes a heart has many pieces for easy are its breaks do not hold to tightly be in absence does it ache teardrops fall in puddles slowly turning into lakes which somehow quench the fire that once burned down Heaven's gates shadow of darkness endowed with Hells passion releasing the slaves By: Jeremy Siedlecki

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/30/2011 3:28:00 PM
Interesting work..Sara
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Date: 3/30/2011 7:09:00 AM
Creative and interesting write, jeremy
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Date: 3/30/2011 5:11:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetry this morning Jeremy. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2011 8:50:00 PM
Lovely lines Jeremy expressing pain and heartache but also the beauty of luv too.. keep trying and when u least expect it ..luv shows up luv.. enjoyed your creativity tonight ...
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Date: 3/29/2011 6:33:00 PM
very detailed, powerful write, Jeremy. Nicely done -Nicole
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