Connie Marcum Wong Poet Verse

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Love Train

Kiss me
I’m a sucker
For love

Love that
You express with
Your lips

Lips that
Tell me you care
With smiles
 
Smiles that
Warm my cockles
And eyes

Eyes that 
See into my
Deep thoughts

Thoughts of
How you make me
Feel great

Great when
I am around
You babe

Babe how
Very handsome
You are

Are we
Really falling
In love?

Love, I
Cherish that word
Love you

You who
Make my sun rise
Daily

Daily 
Thankful for you
For love

© Connie Marcum Wong

For Richard Lamoureux
Mussetle Train - Poetry Contest

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Poet Destroyer A January 11, 2015 at 9:33 PM thank you for the reply Connie

Poet Destroyer A January 11, 2015 at 9:04 PM Nice win..PD Connie Marcum Wong January 11, 2015 at 9:31 PM Thank you PD. It was written as a lark and I certainly didn't expect it to be on the winner's list.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 9, 2015 at 8:51 PM A train of true love written so tenderly...just beautiful, Connie! Congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda Connie Marcum Wong January 11, 2015 at 9:32 PM Thank you Rhonda. I was just having some fun. hugs, Connie

Kelly Deschler January 9, 2015 at 12:41 AM Tender words that can only come straight from the heart, Connie... Congratulations on placing with this beautiful poem! Well done! Connie Marcum Wong January 9, 2015 at 3:57 AM Thanks so much Kelly. Hugs, Connie

Kayod5 Kayode January 5, 2015 at 11:57 PM I real fall for this Connie,congrats on the win...huggs Connie Marcum Wong January 6, 2015 at 2:28 AM Thank you KAYOD5. Hugs back...XXXOOO

Paul Callus January 5, 2015 at 5:05 PM This lovely love train has finished its journey with a lovely winning hoot of joy, Connie! We'll go back 40 years in time and I would take up your offer!:) Congratulations! // paul Connie Marcum Wong January 5, 2015 at 11:07 PM Next time round Paul. Come look for me. Thanks and I am happy to be in your winning company. hugs, Connie

Jan Allison January 5, 2015 at 4:14 PM I love your love train many congrats:-) hugs jan xx Jan Allison January 6, 2015 at 1:25 AM I'm thinking of writing a poem called N/A lol:-) Hugs Jan xx Connie Marcum Wong January 5, 2015 at 11:08 PM Thank you Jan. At least I made the list, and it doesn't matter to me how far up. Cheers, Connie

Richard Lamoureux January 5, 2015 at 3:49 PM Congratulations and thanks for entering my contest Connie. Connie Marcum Wong January 5, 2015 at 11:09 PM You inspired me to take up the challenge Richard. Thank you for placing me on your winner's list. Blessings, Connie

Poet Destroyer A January 1, 2015 at 7:05 PM That is sad Connie, Yesterday was my son's 17th birthday. Sorry about your family's loss. My heart goes out to you and your family. Thanks for the reply.. PD Connie Marcum Wong January 1, 2015 at 9:07 PM Thank you for your sincere regards. A happy birthday to your son. My wishes to you and yours for a happy new year. hugs, Connie

Anthony Beesley December 31, 2014 at 9:51 PM Love train invades land of hate...enjoyed Connie Marcum Wong January 1, 2015 at 9:06 PM Thank you Anthony. I appreciate your comment. Blessings for the New Year!

Tim Ryerson December 29, 2014 at 3:56 AM Whew! Blood pressure pill time...This is a true love poem if there ever was one... He's a lucky guy to say the least! How have you been my friend? - Tim Connie Marcum Wong January 5, 2015 at 11:10 PM Aloha Tim. I am recouping just fine now and I hope your holiday and New Years was wonderful. thank you, Connie

Poet Destroyer A December 25, 2014 at 10:39 PM Connie, love is so easy to die for..love this, Stopping by to say hi, and wish you the best... Enjoy your days and the coming New Year. Love ~LINDA~ Connie Marcum Wong January 1, 2015 at 12:59 AM Thank you. It is a sad new year for me as my 41 year old nephew died today of cancer. He passed on his father's birthday. I wish you and yours a happy new year.

Daver Austin December 25, 2014 at 2:02 PM Just a moment to wish you and yours a Merry Christmas. You are always in my thoughts dear friend. Love, Dave Connie Marcum Wong January 1, 2015 at 1:01 AM You are so sweet Daver. The holidays took all my energy. Thank you so much and I hope your holidays are happy. Love, Connie

Ravindra K Kapoor December 25, 2014 at 1:22 PM What and excellent and beautiful Poem of train compartments like stanzas you have created dear friend. The beauty is that each one links with the other. My good wishes for your contest entry with good wishes for Merry Christmas & and Prosperous New Year 2015. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor Connie Marcum Wong January 5, 2015 at 11:12 PM Thank you very much Ravindra. I hope your holiday was splendid and your New Year filled with all the things that make you happiest. Blessings, Connie

Roy Jerden December 20, 2014 at 7:05 AM Very nice train, Connie. I was kind of expecting a Don Cornelius version, but I think this is better. Connie Marcum Wong December 20, 2014 at 1:54 PM What a great cmpliment Roy. Thank you very much. Happy holidays to you and yours, Connie

Wilma Neels December 19, 2014 at 2:43 AM Awesome entry for the contest Connie, wishing you all the best with it ;) hugs W Wilma Neels December 19, 2014 at 11:05 PM Blessings to you and your family as well Connie! ;) Connie Marcum Wong December 19, 2014 at 9:58 PM Thank you Wilma. So nice to hear from you. Blessings for a lovely holiday, Connie

M. L. Kiser December 18, 2014 at 2:10 PM A wonderfully beautiful poem. Connie Marcum Wong December 18, 2014 at 8:48 PM Thank you much M.L. I just had to try his fun contest.

Monterey Sirak December 17, 2014 at 11:13 PM This is wonderful! Good luck in the contest. I haven't tried one yet. Connie Marcum Wong December 18, 2014 at 8:49 PM I am sure you could write one better than this Monterey. Some I have been reading are just awesome. Thanks, Connie

Matthew Anish December 17, 2014 at 7:20 PM I guess you have found love - seems like it from this poem. Good luck in the contest. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Connie Marcum Wong December 18, 2014 at 8:53 PM I found it 35 years ago Matthew! Been married to the man for 33 just this December. It is all give and take and understanding. Blessings for the holiday, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen December 17, 2014 at 7:17 AM - Dear Connie, a beautiful poem !!! - I will bring you beautiful wishes for Christmas - I hope you will get a lovely time with your family and friends - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Connie Marcum Wong December 18, 2014 at 8:54 PM My daughter and her family are coming over and my daughter is cooking the dinner. Couldn't ask for more than that. Thank you and have a happy holiday too. Hugs, Connie

Arlene Smith December 16, 2014 at 7:31 PM Stopped me in my train tracks, Connie! I saw this contest. Tried a little and my head almost exploded! Lol.. Great job, dear friend!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Len Gasun December 16, 2014 at 11:09 AM A very splendid write my very dear friend Connie. I extremely enjoyed the read. Kudos!. Thank you so much for sharing! Merry Christmas and I lovingly wish you all the best of the season and the year to come. love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Joseph May December 15, 2014 at 7:42 AM Beautiful write Connie...best wishes Connie Marcum Wong December 15, 2014 at 10:53 AM Thank you Joseph. I am enjoying reading these that soupers have posted. Have a great holiday.

Maurice Yvonne December 15, 2014 at 6:34 AM What a gorgeous necklace made of rose gold links of love. Connie Marcum Wong December 15, 2014 at 10:55 AM Your comment is lovely and poetic. Thank you so much Maurice. Blessings, Connie

Paul Callus December 15, 2014 at 5:01 AM I like your love train, Connie! Enjoyed the ride from Kiss~station of departure to Love~station of arrival! You did a very worthy job! Have a nice day! // paul Connie Marcum Wong December 15, 2014 at 10:57 AM What a wonderful comment Paul. I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much, hugs, Connie

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