Love Thread

Tying the knot
one becomes two
frayed we're not
pink intertwined with blue
don't let it slip away
the cut will run deep
dyed in array
with a natural sweep
a needle in a field of cotton
soft with a solid feel
laying on laps not sodden
overlapping the steel
painless though pricked
dropping blood of sanctity
throbbing hearts through conflict
clasping pins tangled in humanity
embroidered with souls touched
by everlasting design
I reach for decoration clutched
forever to twine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 2/15/2021 3:46:00 PM
Quite the poetess you are... This is great. Vert mobing verse. Pangie
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 2/15/2021 3:56:00 PM
Thank you, Panagiota :)
Date: 1/30/2021 7:10:00 AM
Angela I LOVE this write - absolutely riveting because of its uniqueness - well penned with this entwined embroidered romantic write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 1/30/2021 8:21:00 AM
Thank you, Jennifer :)
Date: 1/30/2021 6:53:00 AM
yes tying the knot can be both weak and strong, love this poem, its different and intriguing.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 1/30/2021 8:21:00 AM
Thank you, harry :)
Date: 1/27/2021 10:12:00 AM
I love this, especially the last line :)
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 1/30/2021 8:20:00 AM
Thank you, Akkina :)
Date: 1/27/2021 3:31:00 AM
A poem that has romantic overtones. So well written. ~~
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 1/30/2021 8:20:00 AM
Thank you, Victor :)
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