Love Thaws in Winter Embrace

Written: February 03, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Charles Messina
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This clock let forth one painful scream
Bliss time shrank, as a speck of dream
Just one drop of rain ruined peace
Must hide from massive flash near trees
Charm of winter was freezing love
Smarm melted as spring leaped above
If that was love or sigh, it's slow
Stiff time—season fleeting the glow

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Duke Beaufort

February 10, 2025 at 11:06 AM

SP, you create an image to think about. The icicles are dripping outside the window this afternoon. It's remarkable how time and conditions influence so much of what happens around us. Charm and peace are always good. Smiles!