Love That Lasts

Abiding love is a gift from above
bestowing favor to one special love
caring, committed and being kind
doing the hard thing, sacrifice in mind
enjoying one another’s company 
forever grateful for you and me
going the distance to the very end
having and being each other’s best friend 
interests shared, and taking the time 
just to listen to your thoughts and mine
kinship that grows through the years 
loving the good times, sharing the tears
may be moments that cause great strife
no matter how hard, we’ll make it right
over the years, seeking help from the Lord
purposeful prayer to trust Him more
questions may go unanswered, but we
rest in His promises and let them be
so now we’ll continue to sojourn as one
trusting His care and trusting the Son
undying love, with a strong bond we share
venturing forward, and being aware
wanting to please, and letting it show
xenial ways bring pleasure that grows
youthful exuberance, breaking the mold
zest for living, together, as we grow old. 









Written on 5/18/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Valles Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 2:39 PM
Best abecedarian poem I have ever read. It flowed so well I didn't catch the form at first. SO GOOD.
Leiser Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:43 AM
Thanks so much, Tom. Blessings to you! :)
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 1:30 AM
Laura, you nailed this form of poetry. In doing so gave a spiritual witness that is so upbuilding. I cannot express myself the way other comments have praised you, so I will just say, DITTO!
Leiser Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 3:13 AM
Thanks so much for your kind comments, Barbara. I’m so glad you liked this one! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 12:51 AM
Dear Laura, your Abecedarian poem flows so smoothly from line to line I almost forgot I was reading an Abecedarian. You have done a wonderful job sharing the benefits of our caring Lord within your lines. Outstanding! Blessings xxoo
Leiser Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 5:48 AM
Thank you, dear Connie! I’m so glad you enjoyed this one. I appreciate your kind comments :)
Horsman Avatar
May 25, 2022 at 1:49 AM
Beautiful poetry, within the frame of a difficult form. Love the faith and the loyalty aspects.
Leiser Avatar
May 26, 2022 at 8:42 AM
Thank you, Harry. I truly appreciate your supportive comments..glad you liked this! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 3:39 PM
Nice one, Laura!
Leiser Avatar
May 23, 2022 at 3:14 PM
Thank you, Kim! I’m glad you liked this! :)
Parker Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 12:57 PM
growing old with someone is comfortable, it's like breathing understanding
Leiser Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 2:07 PM
“breathing understanding”! I love that phrase, Frederic! Thanks for commenting! :)
Mcconnell Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 7:09 AM
Great pen Laura, lovely rhyme and flow making it truly inspirational. Blessings always,Gordon
Leiser Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 10:56 AM
Thank you, Gordon. God bless you! :)
Y. Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 5:53 AM
WoW! Laura You composed such a well-written piece for the content. You made this form look easy; I know firsthand that it is not. I found it to be beautiful and romantic. Lovely rhymes and content as well. Best wishes in the contest. Excellent job. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
Horsman Avatar
May 19, 2022 at 4:17 PM
Love this Laura, not an easy form of poetry, yet your beautiful sentiment and words enhances the structure. Has for growing old, yes i know all about that.
Leiser Avatar
May 20, 2022 at 10:53 AM
Thank you, Harry. I am happy you liked this! :)
Hankins Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 7:30 PM
I will just second everything that John said below. I was astounded by the beauty, grace, and flow of your masterful poem.
Leiser Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 8:33 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind compliments, Milton! I’m so glad you enjoyed it! :)
Watt Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 5:10 PM
Laura, this form is a challenging one, and you handle it with such flair... your lines are seamless. Your message of committed love is beautiful with many examples of what keeps a couple going strong after many years... sacrifice, shared interests, making time together, kindness, a shared faith in God. Your rhymes and flow make this an even more delightful read. Blessings, dear friend ~ John
Leiser Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 7:29 PM
Thank you, John, for appreciating this one. I saw the contest and wanted to try this form again, after so many years. I usually try to make it rhyme, as well and feel it flows better that way. Hugs! :)
Buehler Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 4:09 PM
Your romance infused abecedarian leaves nothing to be desired, Laura. Enjoy your evening, Evelyn :)
Leiser Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 7:25 PM
Thank you, Evelyn. I’m happy you enjoyed this one! :)
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