S.Jagathsimhan Nair Poet Verse

Love That Floored 1

Love that floored.


Love that floored 
Love that soared
Love that finally snored
Love that today looks
Like a face smiling 
From the obituary page.

14/Nov/12

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Entry on 24 feb 13 for PD's "Poem never entered in any contest"

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Kim Merryman February 26, 2013 at 12:46 PM Interesting perception. Congrats on your win, Jag! Love, Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2013 at 3:17 AM A very good poem to send to the contest and you won! - Congratulations! - Have a lovely new week! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A February 24, 2013 at 9:35 PM Jag, , thank you for SUPPORTING MY NEWEST contest...CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win ;-) LINDA

Andrea Dietrich November 18, 2012 at 6:14 PM oh MY, I enjoyed the progression this took, Much like a marriage gone very bad.

Harry Horsman November 18, 2012 at 9:51 AM interesting poem, Jag, like the twist...

Debbie Guzzi November 18, 2012 at 8:19 AM wow that's real and real sad too [sigh] Light & Love

David Williams November 17, 2012 at 10:32 AM Jag, I like the twist in this, nice to read your work again....David

Elizabeth Wesley November 16, 2012 at 11:29 AM All this love was just too much and killed him! I sense there is more truth here than meets the eye. A funny one but with a catch. Love, Lizzie

Charlotte Puddifoot November 15, 2012 at 2:29 PM cute little rhyming poem with a hint of intrigue at the end - I think we've all experienced 'love that floors' at one time or another...:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen November 15, 2012 at 6:15 AM Jag, a lovely little poem - thank you. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)