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Love That Floored 1

Love that floored. Love that floored Love that soared Love that finally snored Love that today looks Like a face smiling From the obituary page. 14/Nov/12 S.Jagathsimhan Nair Entry on 24 feb 13 for PD's "Poem never entered in any contest"

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Kim Merryman

Date: 2/26/2013 12:46:00 PM

Interesting perception. Congrats on your win, Jag! Love, Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/25/2013 3:17:00 AM

A very good poem to send to the contest and you won! - Congratulations! - Have a lovely new week! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/24/2013 9:35:00 PM

Jag, , thank you for SUPPORTING MY NEWEST contest...CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win ;-) LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2012 6:14:00 PM

oh MY, I enjoyed the progression this took, Much like a marriage gone very bad.

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/18/2012 9:51:00 AM

interesting poem, Jag, like the twist...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/18/2012 8:19:00 AM

wow that's real and real sad too [sigh] Light & Love

David Williams

Date: 11/17/2012 10:32:00 AM

Jag, I like the twist in this, nice to read your work again....David

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/16/2012 11:29:00 AM

All this love was just too much and killed him! I sense there is more truth here than meets the eye. A funny one but with a catch. Love, Lizzie

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/15/2012 2:29:00 PM

cute little rhyming poem with a hint of intrigue at the end - I think we've all experienced 'love that floors' at one time or another...:-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/15/2012 6:15:00 AM

Jag, a lovely little poem - thank you. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)