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Home » Poems » Victor Buhagiar » Love Surrender

Love Surrender

May today I repay, and don't betray but love I convey. Keep all vows I display, fulfil promises I pray, like a meek lamb I'll be your prey, all our life will be a holiday.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Speaks Volumes
Date: 1/21/2024 3:03:00 PM
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In this Poem Victor you surrender to love so tenderly and completely. Its a wondrous vow filled with sincerity and devotion. Simply perfect. Well done poet, you have created a nine line masterpiece.
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/17/2024 10:04:00 PM
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Great Nonet, Love never ends. Many blessings friend.
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Maria Williams
Date: 1/16/2024 1:27:00 AM
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I agree with all the vows, except the preyed on one. I don't think that would be you, however very good Nonet dear Victor...Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2024 12:29:00 PM
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A different kind of vow, fulfilled from the heart.
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/15/2024 5:17:00 AM
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Creative of you to rhyme in a nonet! Brilliant and soulful one! Pleasure reading this
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 1/14/2024 10:56:00 AM
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Superb writing. I like the last line. A holiday every day is a fine goal
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/13/2024 4:28:00 PM
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a lovely but powerful Nonet about surrendering to God's love...then life will be a holiday...wise words, Victor. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/13/2024 3:19:00 PM
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Victor, your enjoyable nonet has such charm, and I think the rhyming is very nice! This is a fave for me. :)
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Sotto Poet
Date: 1/13/2024 9:21:00 AM
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I enjoy the lovely lyrics in your nonet. As much as I love your creativity, I like the monorhyme in your well-written poem.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/13/2024 8:26:00 AM
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it's cool how you rhymed your romantic nonet!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/13/2024 6:02:00 AM
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Ahh!! Romantic . Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/13/2024 5:17:00 AM
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What a beautiful surrender, Victor!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/13/2024 4:51:00 AM
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You'll be well rewarded Victor, I hope she too matches your undying love for her. Tom
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Silent One
Date: 1/13/2024 4:39:00 AM
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Nice rhymes in your nonet.. I hope you dont become anyone's prey now..
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Joseph May
Date: 1/13/2024 4:13:00 AM
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I like the use of monrhyme in this write, Nicely penned
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/13/2024 2:23:00 AM
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- Sounds like a wonderful life, Victor :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/13/2024 1:06:00 AM
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I’ll be your prey? That’s a new angle!
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