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Victor Buhagiar

Love Surrender

May
today
I repay,
and don't betray
but love I convey.
Keep all vows I display,
fulfil promises I pray,
like a meek lamb I'll be your prey,
all our life will be a holiday.

Copyright © Victor Buhagiar | Year Posted 2024

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January 21, 2024 at 3:03 PM

In this Poem Victor you surrender to love so tenderly and completely. Its a wondrous vow filled with sincerity and devotion. Simply perfect. Well done poet, you have created a nine line masterpiece.

January 17, 2024 at 10:04 PM

Great Nonet, Love never ends. Many blessings friend.

January 16, 2024 at 1:27 AM

I agree with all the vows, except the preyed on one. I don't think that would be you, however very good Nonet dear Victor...Hugs

January 15, 2024 at 12:29 PM

A different kind of vow, fulfilled from the heart.

January 15, 2024 at 5:17 AM

Creative of you to rhyme in a nonet! Brilliant and soulful one! Pleasure reading this

Hilda Greenhough

January 14, 2024 at 10:56 AM

Superb writing. I like the last line. A holiday every day is a fine goal

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 13, 2024 at 3:19 PM

Victor, your enjoyable nonet has such charm, and I think the rhyming is very nice! This is a fave for me. :)

January 13, 2024 at 9:21 AM

I enjoy the lovely lyrics in your nonet. As much as I love your creativity, I like the monorhyme in your well-written poem.

Andrea Dietrich

January 13, 2024 at 8:26 AM

it's cool how you rhymed your romantic nonet!

January 13, 2024 at 6:02 AM

Ahh!! Romantic . Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

January 13, 2024 at 5:17 AM

What a beautiful surrender, Victor!

January 13, 2024 at 4:51 AM

You'll be well rewarded Victor, I hope she too matches your undying love for her. Tom

January 13, 2024 at 4:39 AM

Nice rhymes in your nonet.. I hope you dont become anyone's prey now..

January 13, 2024 at 4:13 AM

I like the use of monrhyme in this write, Nicely penned

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 13, 2024 at 2:23 AM

- Sounds like a wonderful life, Victor :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Unseeking Seeker

January 13, 2024 at 1:06 AM

I’ll be your prey? That’s a new angle!

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