Love Story Pt 2 ( Only 99 More To Go )

Ain't it a shame?
The way they always treat me!
Thirteen years old can't even stay alone.
Doing my thing comes easily.

Live above the influence that's what they always told me.
Trying to make dreams come true now how 'bout you?
Lights always make me dream only about living with her.
God I've got to tell her how I feel or will you tell her for me?

Sorry but it ain't that simple.
Stay strong and don't let the devil deceive you.
Just stay strong and I'll always be with you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Orschell Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 5:48 PM
Okay...this is gonna get interesting...and yes i would tell her for you, but i doubt she'd believe me :/ anyways let's keep this going on to #3. Love Destiny
Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2010 at 9:01 PM
LIke that movie, 500 Days of summer? haha. Good one! LUv, Andrea
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