Love Story

Insistent kisses
Passion exhaled heated breath
Two hearts in rhythm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 4:50 AM
Congratulations on your win Christi in Raul's contest. Love, Carol
Villarosa Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 3:45 AM
Intimacy brings deeper relationship. Congratulations to you Christi for a well-deserved win. (^_^) Noel.
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March 13, 2010 at 7:29 PM
"Two hearts in rhythm" is an apt description of love. Congratulations on placing fifth in Raul's contest. Way to go. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you continued success. Karen
Owens Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 6:39 PM
Congratulations on your win...enjoyed those kisses...lol...Marty
Dietrich Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 6:10 PM
A passionate one! Congratulatiosn, Christi!
Freeman Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 5:33 PM
Congratulations on your success Christi. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 3:15 PM
Congrats Christi on your winning poem and placement in Raul's recent contest.. a wonderful win for u to so enjoy...luv.. Linda-Marie
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March 13, 2010 at 2:55 PM
Christi, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul
Brown Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 10:39 AM
I am enjoying reading everyone's poetry today. I am glad to see your poetry posted here amongest the others I am reading today Christi. Wishing you a weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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March 4, 2010 at 11:37 PM
Passionate senryu, Christi. If this is for Raul's contest, I think you have a winner! Love, Carolyn
A  Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 9:21 PM
Very romantic enjoyed reading...
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