Love Song

I wont let go,

you can't say no,

it shouldn't end here,

together so clear.

Not always the best,

never like the rest.

We have more than enough,

sometimes it's been rough.

Don't let love fail,

in your heart i dwell.

Unconditional dream,

or weak in the seam.

Whatever it has been,

i would do it again.

Never looking back,

or ever losing track,

For, we will keep holding on,

for this is our love song.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/6/2012 1:51:00 AM
This is so sweet and beautiful it makes me want to cry! LOVE IT!!
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Date: 12/19/2011 8:59:00 PM
what a beautiful love song John...I am combing ur old wrks and I found a gem in the ocean od pearl...vey very mesmerizing :)
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Date: 12/17/2011 6:20:00 PM
lovely work
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Date: 12/6/2011 11:27:00 AM
Well done! Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/19/2011 7:42:00 AM
A tender touch John, romantic with a touch of sadness........ Thanks for your comments on mine, I enjoyed your visit.............Elizabeth
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Date: 6/4/2011 5:12:00 AM
Beautiful John , a look into the heart and a glimpse of a great man. Anne
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Date: 5/22/2011 2:57:00 PM
Man, I'm glad you posted some more stuff brother. I always look forward to reading your material. It's deep and personable. It's like a glimpse into your heart and soul, the way poetry should be. Wonderful job my friend. R.M. a.k.a. Matt
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Date: 5/22/2011 11:02:00 AM
John this has deep romantic flavor my friend and it speaks softly with emotion... so glad u enjoyed my collab with James and gave it such a high rating.. talents mesh well when the right combo is composing... hope u are having a terrific day luv..
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:25:00 AM
yes those emotional times can produce some bittersweet poetry, as is evident here, good write anyway - charlotte
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:05:00 AM
I am going through some emotional times, so i am reading and writing love poems....heartbreak is such sweet sorrow..
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