John Aaron Green Poet Rhyme

Love Song

I wont let go,

you can't say no,

it shouldn't end here,

together so clear.

Not always the best,

never like the rest.

We have more than enough,

sometimes it's been rough.

Don't let love fail,

in your heart i dwell.

Unconditional dream,

or weak in the seam.

Whatever it has been,

i would do it again.

Never looking back,

or ever losing track,

For, we will keep holding on,

for this is our love song.

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Toshia Hall January 6, 2012 at 1:51 AM This is so sweet and beautiful it makes me want to cry! LOVE IT!!

Red Fiery December 19, 2011 at 8:59 PM what a beautiful love song John...I am combing ur old wrks and I found a gem in the ocean od pearl...vey very mesmerizing :)

Lisa Cooper December 17, 2011 at 6:20 PM lovely work

Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2011 at 11:27 AM Well done! Anne-Lise

Elizabeth Wesley June 19, 2011 at 7:42 AM A tender touch John, romantic with a touch of sadness........ Thanks for your comments on mine, I enjoyed your visit.............Elizabeth

Anne Rutherford June 4, 2011 at 5:12 AM Beautiful John , a look into the heart and a glimpse of a great man. Anne

Matt Hunt May 22, 2011 at 2:57 PM Man, I'm glad you posted some more stuff brother. I always look forward to reading your material. It's deep and personable. It's like a glimpse into your heart and soul, the way poetry should be. Wonderful job my friend. R.M. a.k.a. Matt

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 22, 2011 at 11:02 AM John this has deep romantic flavor my friend and it speaks softly with emotion... so glad u enjoyed my collab with James and gave it such a high rating.. talents mesh well when the right combo is composing... hope u are having a terrific day luv..

Charlotte Puddifoot May 22, 2011 at 8:25 AM yes those emotional times can produce some bittersweet poetry, as is evident here, good write anyway - charlotte

John Aaron Green May 22, 2011 at 8:05 AM I am going through some emotional times, so i am reading and writing love poems....heartbreak is such sweet sorrow..