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Love Sighs in Quiet

Written: May 08, 2025, for contest by Brian Strand ********** whistle echoes far parting tears on the platform tracks lead to nowhere p i d d l i n g seats remain passengers sigh in silence gone yet lingering.

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/10/2025 7:34:00 AM

SP, I'm thinking about all the various separations in life and what it means to have things go on their way. I reminds me how our happiness and sadness become intertwined. Something to think about always. Smiles!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/9/2025 1:16:00 AM

- Beautifully written... creatively shaped, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Paige Hind

Date: 5/8/2025 4:47:00 PM

Reminds me of the Titanic. This is beautiful, love the first line, it made the whole poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/8/2025 4:11:00 PM

Hello Sotto, This is a wonderful poem you created. Alaha! Darlene/