Sotto Poet Poet Haiku

Love Sighs in Quiet

Written: May 08, 2025, for contest by Brian Strand

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whistle echoes far

parting tears on the platform

tracks lead to nowhere


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passengers sigh in silence

gone yet lingering.

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Duke Beaufort May 10, 2025 at 7:34 AM SP, I'm thinking about all the various separations in life and what it means to have things go on their way. I reminds me how our happiness and sadness become intertwined. Something to think about always. Smiles!

Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2025 at 1:16 AM - Beautifully written... creatively shaped, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Paige Hind May 8, 2025 at 4:47 PM Reminds me of the Titanic. This is beautiful, love the first line, it made the whole poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu May 8, 2025 at 4:11 PM Hello Sotto, This is a wonderful poem you created. Alaha! Darlene/