Love Shall Say It Is Sorry For Jew

Love shall say it's sorry so truth may atone
My soul brings praise to no other, you alone
Like the stars tell stories of your eyes alone
Like the tides weave history in every moan
I have languished in the light of other moons
That made our emptiness bright. The ruins
Of my dreams I cusp in my hands, and walk
The printed sand to you. Trace my past now,
See again the dunes where I bleed, O talk
To me with understanding as trust will allow
For we long in the rain edge friendships blind
Bandaging fears with the solace of any kind
Yet never sucked in, nor yet content outside
We overcompensate for the thing we hide.
Shall I despise you, shall I disrespect you, or
Ever go back to my busy emptiness? Believe
Me, you are the jewel kingdoms fought for
And to you alone who fill my dim void, I cleave

Love shall say it's sorry. since our hearts keeps
No covenant with the night, nor your form sleeps.
Remember you are prized, and no beauty glows
Majestic in my eyes, like you who keep our vows.
Friends may wander, virtual or real, into my call 
And sing there awhile to wither the heart's gall
But songs alone will never fill my void, you alone
Right the history of my shamble and of my moan.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/18/2011 6:14:00 AM
No doubt you are madly in love with a fantastic person. Very nice poem
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Date: 4/11/2011 9:56:00 AM
So where are you handsome man? Will you not write a verse for me about the native healers in Africa? For my contest the Shamans Way? Come HOME! Light & Love
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Date: 5/30/2011 5:49:00 PM
Sorry Deb, home is where the heart is and that was in my arms, that's where this handsome man my husband was at the precise moment you were asking. Guess you will have to take a rain check!
Date: 3/31/2011 9:47:00 AM
beatiful write
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Date: 2/16/2011 12:23:00 AM
Very emotional and beautiful Dave. .lovely!
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Date: 2/11/2011 2:45:00 PM
You have all the women swooning ;) though the title does not seem to fit the beauty of the verse. Light & Love
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Date: 2/1/2011 5:15:00 PM
David, this is absolutely beautiful! A poem worthy enough to lay upon her beautiful heart! Love and prayers to you both, always! Annalise
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Date: 2/1/2011 3:29:00 PM
You are SOOO in love, David. She's a lucky lady to have a man who regards her so highly and needs him in her life. Hope this all works out and the wedding bells resound. Love, Carolyn
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