Yanny Widjanarko Poet I do not know?

Love Rippled

Don't wake me from the dream, if this is a dream
Throne we shall sit, when we celebrate life after scar
Alone in my sanity more or less drives me crazy
Drone of the dark life has sunk me too far

Let me dwell and safe in your arm
Set me free from the bondage of tangled chain
Vignette of this might be fragile or blur
Yet we have survived beneath the pouring rain

Note: First attempt in "Lento form" 

A poetic form created by Lencio Dominic Rodrigues, the Lento is named after it's creator, taken from his first name Lencio and rhymed to Cento, an existing form of poetry.

A Lento consists of two quatrains with a fixed rhyme scheme of abcb, defe as the second and forth lines of each stanza must rhyme. The fun part of this poem is thrown in here as all the FIRST words of each verse should rhyme. There is no fixed syllable structure to the Lento, but keeping a good, flowing rhythm is recommended. Feel free to try! :D

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Michael Dom April 22, 2013 at 12:11 AM Hey Yanny, this looks like an intersting form. Thanks for pointing it out. Cheers! :-) Yanny Widjanarko April 22, 2013 at 1:50 AM You are welcome Mike :D I also got this poem format introduced by the maker, Lencio, it is fun to try :)

Harry Horsman April 10, 2013 at 9:52 AM first attempt, wondrous poem,, does not get much better than this... Yanny Widjanarko April 10, 2013 at 10:00 AM Thank you Harry, your words always encourage me more, you are really make my evening even better :D wishing you a wonderful day Harry :D hug, Yanny

Richard Lamoureux April 8, 2013 at 6:27 PM Hey Yanny your last comment inspired a poem. Yanny Widjanarko April 10, 2013 at 9:59 AM Glad to be your muse Rick :D hug, yanny

Richard Lamoureux April 5, 2013 at 8:01 AM We have had amazing weather and I just got back from a spa weekend at Sparkling Hills in Vernon BC. I put some pictures on Facebook.

Richard Lamoureux April 4, 2013 at 4:59 PM Hi Yanny, how are things on your side of the world? Yanny Widjanarko April 4, 2013 at 5:48 PM Things are awesome here :D how about yours Rick? :D wishing yours are as stunning as mine :D hug, yanny

Anne-Lise Andresen April 4, 2013 at 6:14 AM ..... I'll be so quiet .... just whisper in your ear ..... : This is a lovely poem ....... dream on my friend Yanny. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Yanny Widjanarko April 4, 2013 at 5:47 PM Thank you Anne :D wishing you a lovely day there :) hug, yanny

Richard Lamoureux April 1, 2013 at 7:43 AM Good evening Yanny

Richard Lamoureux March 31, 2013 at 6:44 AM What a treat to start my day with your poem. You are my first poem of my morning. How does the Lento form work??? Yanny Widjanarko March 31, 2013 at 7:15 AM Thank you Rick, really glad to know that my poem was your first reading today :D hehehe, feel free to try this format Rick :D let me know if you done with it :D

Len Gasun March 30, 2013 at 10:31 PM Speechless to read this brilliant write of yours my dear friend! You're such an amazing poet and your first time form is already great my dear Yanny! Two thumbs up here! Thank you so much for sharing your gem & have a wonderful and great day! love and hugs, Leonora Yanny Widjanarko March 30, 2013 at 10:38 PM Thank you Leonora, missing you here :D and really glad to have your comment as well as yours are always pleasant to be read :D happy Easter for you dear, wishing you a blessing day :D hug, yanny