Love Rejection

Emotions are concentrated in three places
They muddle up the brain 
They are evident on all faces 
And its heart that feels the pain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 20, 2010 at 6:50 PM
hum! did not know you could tell these things like that,,,lol,,j/k/ anyways ,,,:) ,,, by the way i am also here to tell you i was going over my contest...lol... and you did not add the word (WORST) to your title,,, well I will finish my contest in the morning,, hope you add it by than so i can place it where it belongs,,, thanks you ,,p..d
Neels Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 11:24 AM
So much truth in this write Sidney
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October 27, 2010 at 6:03 PM
good observations.... enjoyed! Be still your heart... heal I say heal that heart!! LOL
Wilson Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 5:27 PM
very insightful..and emotional too..take care~Deb
Slaughter Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 4:21 PM
I really loved this poem! Nicely written and oh so true! Thanks for sharing!
Haick Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 3:28 PM
Very insightful, Sidney..true. Tough it is..but one never knows what blessings we incur when undeserving people exit our lives! We never know! As long as you hold on for tomorrow is another day! Hope you're feeling much better today, my friend.. Audrey
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October 27, 2010 at 2:39 PM
So true , so true....It sucks then its great and then......we never know
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