Jan Allison Poet Verse

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Love Rat

You’d assured me that you were not wed
we made passionate love in my bedroom
You gave me roses and pink champagne
adulterer should be your middle name

Adulterer should be your middle name
you gave me roses and pink champagne
We made passionate love in my bedroom
you’d assured me that you were not wed

MIRROR MIRROR Poetry Contest

Sponsored by John Lawless

08/10/20

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Jennifer Proxenos August 18, 2020 at 11:58 AM Bad guys, they take chances - Darling, will be a way this weekend, have to attend this darn meeting over the weekend - cheater! A clever mirror mirror poem for the contest Jan, best of luck. this is a winner. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Jan Allison August 18, 2020 at 1:23 PM Thanks Jennifer - all those excuses and many more:-(:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf August 11, 2020 at 7:54 PM May I give a copy of this to my beloved wife for our anniversary, please?! ~ Slick Willy, aka Bill Clinton. lol. Superb penning, Jan! :) gw Jan Allison August 12, 2020 at 5:04 AM lol you can give a copy to Bill if you like it lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Panagiota Romios August 11, 2020 at 3:08 PM Good one Jan! Perfect idea and verse for the contest. Bad Cad,,( Boo, hiss) Pangiexx Jan Allison August 11, 2020 at 3:09 PM he certainly is a cad:-( hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen August 11, 2020 at 6:34 AM - A great mirror picture poem, Jan :) ... rotten done :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison August 11, 2020 at 8:17 AM Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel August 11, 2020 at 2:18 AM Angry lines mirrored well, Jan:) Jan Allison August 11, 2020 at 8:17 AM Thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper August 10, 2020 at 10:05 PM Wow.. nicely done, Jan, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve Jan Allison August 11, 2020 at 8:12 AM Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta August 10, 2020 at 3:22 PM Nicely done, but would telling the truth make any difference? Carpe diem! Aloha! Rico Jan Allison August 11, 2020 at 8:11 AM ... maybe not :-( hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan August 10, 2020 at 1:20 PM What a cad...no matter which way it's read. Good write, Jan. Jan Allison August 10, 2020 at 1:34 PM thanks so much Jenna, it was quite a challenge:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer August 10, 2020 at 12:45 PM well done, jan! best of luck in the contest... Jan Allison August 10, 2020 at 12:46 PM thanks Ilene:-) hugs jan xx

Mark Koplin August 10, 2020 at 12:44 PM Sounds like somebody was being naughty. Great job Jan! Good luck in the contest. Jan Allison August 10, 2020 at 12:46 PM thanks Mark:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues August 10, 2020 at 12:03 PM Great! The mirror effect worked perfectly on this one! I could see her saying this over and over again! Jan Allison August 10, 2020 at 12:09 PM Pure fiction for me but it did happen to someone i know on line - they were together over 2 /12 years:-( hugs jan xx