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Love Rat

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You’d assured me that you were not wed we made passionate love in my bedroom You gave me roses and pink champagne adulterer should be your middle name Adulterer should be your middle name you gave me roses and pink champagne We made passionate love in my bedroom you’d assured me that you were not wed MIRROR MIRROR Poetry Contest Sponsored by John Lawless 08/10/20

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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 8/18/2020 11:58:00 AM
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Bad guys, they take chances - Darling, will be a way this weekend, have to attend this darn meeting over the weekend - cheater! A clever mirror mirror poem for the contest Jan, best of luck. this is a winner. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2020 1:23:00 PM
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Thanks Jennifer - all those excuses and many more:-(:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/11/2020 7:54:00 PM
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May I give a copy of this to my beloved wife for our anniversary, please?! ~ Slick Willy, aka Bill Clinton. lol. Superb penning, Jan! :) gw
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/12/2020 5:04:00 AM
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lol you can give a copy to Bill if you like it lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2020 6:34:00 AM
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- A great mirror picture poem, Jan :) ... rotten done :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/11/2020 8:17:00 AM
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Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 8/11/2020 2:18:00 AM
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Angry lines mirrored well, Jan:)
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/11/2020 8:17:00 AM
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Thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/10/2020 10:05:00 PM
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Wow.. nicely done, Jan, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/11/2020 8:12:00 AM
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Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/10/2020 3:22:00 PM
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Nicely done, but would telling the truth make any difference? Carpe diem! Aloha! Rico
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/11/2020 8:11:00 AM
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... maybe not :-( hugs Jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/10/2020 1:20:00 PM
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What a cad...no matter which way it's read. Good write, Jan.
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/10/2020 1:34:00 PM
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thanks so much Jenna, it was quite a challenge:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 8/10/2020 12:45:00 PM
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well done, jan! best of luck in the contest...
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/10/2020 12:46:00 PM
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thanks Ilene:-) hugs jan xx
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/10/2020 12:44:00 PM
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Sounds like somebody was being naughty. Great job Jan! Good luck in the contest.
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/10/2020 12:46:00 PM
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thanks Mark:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/10/2020 12:03:00 PM
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Great! The mirror effect worked perfectly on this one! I could see her saying this over and over again!
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/10/2020 12:09:00 PM
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Pure fiction for me but it did happen to someone i know on line - they were together over 2 /12 years:-( hugs jan xx

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