Love Potion Number Six

Though he tried to win her affection
    All he got was her rejection
  Then his best friend said he knew
   A woman who could make a 'love brew'

 So off they went with the notion
   That they could acquire this love potion
  They knocked on the old lady's door
    She let them in, so they could explore

 He told her of the girl he adored
   And how by her he was ignored
 Old lady Annie knew just what to do
   She whipped up a most potent brew

  It was indeed her favorite mix
   She called it "love potion number six"
 Then she said; "After putting this in her drink my boy
   The first person she sees will be her love toy"

 Just one drop and the girl would brim
   With so much affection, only for him!
 But now he had to think,
   How to get one drop in her drink

 He knew the place she'd go to eat
    And that's where he'd put in the potion sweet
 So his friend distracted her, and in a wink
   He put the love potion into her drink

 He puckered up for a passionate kiss,
    But then something went amiss
 After she took a sip of the potion's blend
   The first person she saw was his best friend!!

 10-15-19

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Date: 11/5/2019 11:36:00 AM
Great story, love it! Hugs
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Date: 10/27/2019 12:03:00 PM
Ha, ha! Enjoyed the story... And a special thanks for showing the album cover. Always wondered what the guys looked like who sang "Love Potion #9," a song I've hummed so many times. Thanks a million! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 10/23/2019 6:00:00 PM
Oh, so it did work.
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Date: 10/22/2019 8:00:00 PM
Oh wow that would really be terrible! I loved this Joseph!;)
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Date: 10/22/2019 1:40:00 PM
This is such a laugh, so wonderfully crafted and creative and most surely a definite win. A fav. both poem and song! Well penned Joseph Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/21/2019 2:03:00 PM
Hi Joseph, This is a good one. I loved that song, too.
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Date: 10/16/2019 10:02:00 PM
Love the song & your verse Joseph...well crafted my friend...best for a win...^WW^ :o)
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Joseph May
Date: 10/17/2019 3:54:00 PM
Thank you WW
Date: 10/16/2019 7:47:00 AM
One of my fav, uk groups of the 60's Joseph, love your tack on the song..clever poetry, I Like.
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Joseph May
Date: 10/17/2019 3:54:00 PM
Thank you Harry
Date: 10/15/2019 10:18:00 PM
Poor Guy!! He missed his chance, but now- his best friend has a chance at Romance. This is cute, clever and very creative. Your thoughts made me smile. :) Brandy
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Joseph May
Date: 10/16/2019 7:12:00 AM
Thank you Brandy
Date: 10/15/2019 3:07:00 PM
silly guy having his friend in the room at the same time!! I knew that was coming!! Well done, Joseph!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/15/2019 3:25:00 PM
That was good that you figured out what was coming, Thanks Andrea..
Date: 10/15/2019 1:14:00 PM
- An entertaining write, Joseph :) ... with music of old memories ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 10/15/2019 3:23:00 PM
Thank you Anne...hugs
Date: 10/15/2019 10:07:00 AM
A awesome poem. So adorable. Love it. Bless you with many more, Love and prayers, Gina
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Joseph May
Date: 10/15/2019 3:22:00 PM
Thank you Gina
Date: 10/15/2019 9:55:00 AM
That was really cute and so cool. I loved everything about this, the story, the flow and the rhymes. That ending was great. Best wishes in the contest if you are entering this.
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Joseph May
Date: 10/15/2019 9:57:00 AM
Thank you Chris..
Date: 10/15/2019 8:59:00 AM
A truly hilarious ending, Joseph..captivating story you wrote.. a fun read.
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Joseph May
Date: 10/15/2019 9:57:00 AM
Thank you Vijay
Date: 10/15/2019 8:56:00 AM
this is perfectly rhymed and styled for a smile. Great entry!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/15/2019 9:56:00 AM
Thank you Jeanne
Date: 10/15/2019 8:43:00 AM
Wow! Brother May, you got skills my friend so well done!!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/15/2019 9:56:00 AM
Thank you brother Bobby
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