Love Over Fate

Love over fate

The wind did blow too rough that night, 
But then, it took you away with its flight,
I hadn’t had enough, of the nights or days it seems,
When I slept in your arms and woke in your dreams…

You feel, in the world you’ve done your part
But you should know; you’re alive in my heart
Bidding me adieus, you knew I’d not believe,
Your parting: its veracity too throbbing to perceive.

I now know the deep depth of solitude
With which, after long my pain has been sewed
The mark of your love remains deep in my core 
When I lost you...it was either black or sore

The grandeur of god towed me to your life,
But wasn’t it the same...Which took you out of my sight?
That time with forte my fate fought with me, 
conquered your life, left me  hopeless; alive
Back I fought, to have you by my side,
So you should know…in my heart you’re alive….
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 27, 2015 at 2:23 PM
AWESOME WRITE
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October 5, 2010 at 9:01 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ashwathy. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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October 4, 2010 at 1:42 PM
Very passionate and touch thoughts on love and its yearnings, ashwathy. Very impressive you have penned. kepp it up,
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October 4, 2010 at 7:35 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your poetry today.. hope u will check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv..
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