Love Operation

When you left me 
my world began to crumble 
My mind was racing and playing tricks 
on me, because everyone was looking just 
like you. 
When you left 
so did my heart 
Like an heart operation gone bad 
there I lay flat lining 
My heart stop pumping 
the breathe in my body no longer exist 
Then reality kicks in and I realize 
that there is no life without you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hoffman Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 2:59 PM
Nice work!
Darling Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 10:00 AM
I really enjoyed this poem! Thank you for sharing!! ( : 7!
May Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 8:56 AM
There is love and life just over the horizon...Nice write Shermane...Welcome to Poetry Soup
A   Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 1:19 PM
WELL DONE, SHERMANE. LINDA
Dahlusion Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 9:07 AM
To live by the essence of another, to breathe their air ... yes to your honesty and to your bleeding heart. Bravo! –-))
A  Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 8:50 PM
Shermane, good write. Skat
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