Love On a Mountain

Standing on the moutain
Watching the spring flow like a fountain
Breeze through the air
Not having one care
True beauty is what I see
Gods creation sets me free
Watching the sunset
The day is bout to reset
Day into night
The moon so bright
Hearing natures sound
Time feels like its being reround
Crickets playing the fiddle
My heart rest in the middle
This time I'd like to share
With another beauty so rare
Wish you were here
To help me remove this tear
My heart for you is true
I am so in love with you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Fox Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 4:42 PM
Springs don't flow like fountains !
Barth Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 4:46 PM
This particular spring shoots out of the side of the mountain like a fountain not like a. Water fall but as a stream which inspired the words. But also it is word play
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