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Love On a Mountain

Standing on the moutain Watching the spring flow like a fountain Breeze through the air Not having one care True beauty is what I see Gods creation sets me free Watching the sunset The day is bout to reset Day into night The moon so bright Hearing natures sound Time feels like its being reround Crickets playing the fiddle My heart rest in the middle This time I'd like to share With another beauty so rare Wish you were here To help me remove this tear My heart for you is true I am so in love with you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/13/2015 4:42:00 PM
Springs don't flow like fountains !
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Jason Barth
Date: 3/13/2015 4:46:00 PM
This particular spring shoots out of the side of the mountain like a fountain not like a. Water fall but as a stream which inspired the words. But also it is word play

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