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Love On a Lonely Beach

Pine branch on the beach I break the needles to smell Christmas memories

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Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/16/2013 6:06:00 AM

Really lovely work Molly. Well done!

Merton Lee

Date: 9/10/2013 5:28:00 AM

very well written and crafted to evoke in readers' that profound impact and vivid image and sense experience. Well done. Merton Lee

Molly Montgomery
Date: 9/10/2013 12:08:00 PM

Thanks, Merton! It's a true story! I've just read all of your poetry and really enjoyed! I will comment soon. Molly

Donna Jones

Date: 9/2/2013 1:39:00 PM

I loved your haiku....so far away from snow..and pine trees...ahh memories....good job....