Love of My Life

No lover, friend, no girl or boy
Will ever take your place
No matter with who I fall for
You’ll never be replaced

I never thought it would be so tense
As I say to you ‘good bye’
I kiss and salute you from the gate
Beneath the starry sky

Each minute and hour of every day
Is valuable to me
The most we’ll make from the time we have 
So precious it will be

Many people I will meet
Many friends I’ll make
But no one man will take your step
For our will bond will never break

The physical distance between us
May be a million miles
But nothing will break our partnership
Our lives will be worth while
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
October 2, 2025 at 11:37 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Baity Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 4:57 AM
Nice poem Jordan...very well written
Brown Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 7:46 AM
Thank you for sharing this with us today. Awesome writing. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 6:38 AM
Well written
Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 6:20 AM
Very impressive writing,Jordan. Keep it up. God Speed ..Sara
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