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Love of My Life

As I hold you, I hold the world itself Its you and I forever You; my better half

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Courtney Dyer

Date: 12/1/2009 11:15:00 PM

Beautiful!

Rima Anil.Naik

Date: 6/9/2009 3:33:00 AM

wow! what best way to describe....As I hold you...I hold the world itself. beautiful.. Thanks for commenting on my poem.

Bianca Reyes

Date: 5/31/2009 6:39:00 PM

simple, sweet, beautiful. great poem for a very lucky woman. thank you jeremia for your comments on my poem. it is inspiring. :) ~ Andrea Bianca

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/30/2009 5:29:00 AM

B E A U T I F U L---CHARMA

Alley Poe

Date: 5/30/2009 12:36:00 AM

aww mr. smooth! remember that babe. aww truly do you make my heart smile. -Always your Alley bear

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/28/2009 3:43:00 PM

Forever and ever she stays in your heart,cos you re a good young brother--charma

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/28/2009 2:56:00 AM

This is a very sweet tribute of love to your better half. Excellent. Lovingly, Dane

Cesar Cantu

Date: 5/27/2009 11:47:00 PM

Feeling like holdind eternity and totality in a hug, that's sweet jojojo thanks for sharing!!!