Love of My Life

As I hold you, I hold the world itself
Its you and I forever
You; my better half
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dyer Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 11:15 PM
Beautiful!
Anil.Naik Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 3:33 AM
wow! what best way to describe....As I hold you...I hold the world itself. beautiful.. Thanks for commenting on my poem.
Reyes Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 6:39 PM
simple, sweet, beautiful. great poem for a very lucky woman. thank you jeremia for your comments on my poem. it is inspiring. :) ~ Andrea Bianca
Chircop Avatar
May 30, 2009 at 5:29 AM
B E A U T I F U L---CHARMA
Poe Avatar
May 30, 2009 at 12:36 AM
aww mr. smooth! remember that babe. aww truly do you make my heart smile. -Always your Alley bear
Chircop Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 3:43 PM
Forever and ever she stays in your heart,cos you re a good young brother--charma
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 2:56 AM
This is a very sweet tribute of love to your better half. Excellent. Lovingly, Dane
Cantu Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 11:47 PM
Feeling like holdind eternity and totality in a hug, that's sweet jojojo thanks for sharing!!!
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