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Love of a Teen

Love will keep us alive darling No matter what obstacle we may endure Love can never be bought darling Neither by dollars nor sterling That i am absolutely sure. What is love? I asked myself Quite some time ago When i met her.... for some strange reason I suddenly felt i'd know Her beauty filled brown eyes... like hazel nuts Were gleaming through my dreams She was everywhere... no matter where i looked I was filled with an overwhelming feeling And... i knew what it was all about This attraction all made sense I was in love for the first time in my life And boy! it really felt great It couldn't be barred by any steel cage Nor by any sacred way I tried so hard to keep it inside but Hey! I too have my limits okay? Limits were exceeded... feelings won the race As i saw an empty seat where she sits I sat down beside her... she smiled at me I was in heaven... yes... heaven was what i was seeing She was an angel indeed So beautiful and lively Lips like two red chillies Her hair so smooth and fine And as i was about to get close to my gal Heaven itself did something rash. I was talking with my girl with all the courage and might But outta nowhere a dozen more angels popped in to sight Hell! My feelings just shifted And day dreaming started. Love is blind they say - but not ma eyes That is how it all ended Was it love? Was it a crush? Or was i a self centered ignorant mush Answers! Answers! Answers!... seriously who can tell? Love or no love.. Crush or whatever... Man! It sure felt great. Let me know what you think about this too and for all the people who commented on my previous poem... Thank you very much for your kind words and hope that you would enjoy this as well.

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Date: 1/22/2016 7:47:00 PM
CHARMAL, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 10/7/2010 4:58:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Charmal. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/6/2010 8:51:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry tonight.. hope u will check out the many contests offered on soup site...good luck with luv...
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