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Love No Expression

I never saw the end of the ocean,your heart was cold as ice,it had no emotion,through the strongest wave,i pulled your weight,love has left the water,only pride you gave,blue skies were in focus,words of doubt covered me,the sun turned into rain,hate was put to notice,i never saw the end of the ocean,my footprints are in the sand,close enough to touch the water,i will wait until i see the emotion,appear on this man

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Date: 10/30/2008 10:31:00 AM
Hi Tiffany! First, welcome to Poetry Soup. I didn't notice your postings on the 20th (sorry!) but I have just read through them all, including today's. Your words are full of soul and very moving. I like them very much and was surprised by the lack of comments. It just left me wondering if it was because of the shape/layout of your poems. I am not suggesting you change them, because this is a part of your style. Love, Nigel
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Date: 10/20/2008 9:56:00 AM
Touching write Tiffany. I definitely felt your pain. Blessings Michael
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