Love My Mess
Eyes were all closed,
I was at my best…
You looked at my flaws,
Like I failed in a test.
Immeasurable efforts!
Time I consumed.
But it ended unwell
I was your accused.
Were you at your best?
Did outshine everyone?
As far as I remember
You’re a hopeless no one.
I made it till end
It was a huge success
Be better than me
If you don’t love my mess.
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