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Love Me Like You Mean It

When your eyes match mine, like cinnamon sugar. The hotness or the sweetness pours over my heart. When I can feel the tulip stems, their leaves buckle my knees. The blossoms explode in every direction, breathlessly. And lips soft like butter, glide and linger, stay on mine. I surrender to the Summer ride, Venetian gondola. When memories, shared, bring joy and tears, so many years. I’ve never believed you’d rush out the door, leave me pondering. You’ve loved me with intensity and with a simple smile, curved, lighting up your lashes and cheeks, and by the way, mine. The pace of little feet, stretching bodies of progeny, comfortable in their security you’ve brought this family — they feel our pulse. Love me like you mean it, Dear, not for moments but a lifetime. Your grand promise kept, as I kept mine, to love you all the time. 11/29/2019 Love Me Like You Mean It Poetry Contest Sponsor - Julie Written in unrhymed couplets

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Date: 1/20/2020 1:35:00 PM
Nicely done, Kim, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/20/2020 1:49:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! xx
Date: 1/19/2020 9:18:00 AM
Hello Kim, very lovely poem. Have a nice time :) Best regards.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2020 2:57:00 PM
Thank you, Abdullah!
Date: 1/1/2020 6:26:00 PM
Kim, I simply must remind my forgetful self to read more of your poetry. I seem to always be late in doing so and commenting on it. It is always wonderful. Congrats on 39 years. As of 11 January this new year, I will celebrate a different kind of anniversary --- 38 years of sobriety and living a better life than I ever imagined possible.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/2/2020 9:04:00 PM
Thank you, Curtis! So happy for you, Curtis!
Date: 11/30/2019 2:03:00 AM
A delicate, delectable, delightful poem with exactly the right amount of romance.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2019 2:36:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 11/29/2019 3:53:00 PM
A lovely poem written with depth, intensity and sincerity. Layered with love and romance. Best wishes for the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2019 3:57:00 PM
Thank you, W.A.!
Date: 11/29/2019 1:31:00 PM
Lovely Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2019 3:56:00 PM
Thank you, Eric!
Date: 11/29/2019 9:10:00 AM
This is wondrously expressed. I hope your desire has been realized. Hugs Rick.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2019 1:16:00 PM
Been married for 39 years :)
Date: 11/29/2019 8:40:00 AM
I love this poem like I mean it because I do mean it. : ) Best wishes in the contest Kim. This will be up at the top of the list for sure.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2019 8:42:00 AM
Thanks, Chris! I hope so :)
Date: 11/29/2019 7:34:00 AM
Enjoyed the read, Kim--a heartfelt write in eternal sentiments.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2019 7:37:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 11/29/2019 6:08:00 AM
Very poignant honesty and romantic imagery, Kim! A sparkling glow of poetic brilliance. Really LOVE the flow of this gorgeous poem! Going into the fave file. Love and joy for the holidays and always.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2019 7:37:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Freddie!

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