Joseph May Poet Other

Love Lost

She was sad
 When he left
 That cold day

 Her heart broke
 Her tears flowed
 She felt lost

 Perhaps love
 Would bloom once
 More in spring

 1-27-2023
 Tricube Poetry Contest
 Sponsor: Sara Kendrick

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Anne-Lise Andresen January 31, 2023 at 6:29 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Joseph -

Sara Kendrick January 30, 2023 at 4:41 AM Never know what the renewal of spring will bring. Thank you for your participation in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Very creative way to go. Sara Joseph May January 31, 2023 at 12:40 PM Thank you for my placement Sara

Christuraj Alex January 29, 2023 at 9:09 PM Great hoipe. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Brandy Nicole January 28, 2023 at 7:14 PM Spring is when love seems to bloom the most, so there's a chance she'll find love again. This is beautiful and emotional, all at the same time. My best to you, Joseph. Hugs, Brandy

Tom Cunningham January 27, 2023 at 1:48 PM Always sad when love is one sided and its hard to move on but one should never give up on hope. Good luck in the contest Joseph. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Victor Buhagiar January 27, 2023 at 10:33 AM Wonderful poem expressed in such few words.

Kim Rodrigues January 27, 2023 at 9:41 AM Hope on the outskirts!

Vijay Pandit January 27, 2023 at 6:08 AM You told a cohesive story in just a few words in this new form. Expertly done, Joseph. No doubt a winner.

Suzanne Delaney January 27, 2023 at 4:39 AM Love the optimistic closing in this, Joseph. Good Luck in the Contest. SuZ

Mystic Rose Rose January 27, 2023 at 3:38 AM very well done Joseph, perhaps love will bloom once more, I adore this