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Love Lost

She was sad When he left That cold day Her heart broke Her tears flowed She felt lost Perhaps love Would bloom once More in spring 1-27-2023 Tricube Poetry Contest Sponsor: Sara Kendrick

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Date: 1/31/2023 6:29:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Joseph -
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Date: 1/30/2023 4:41:00 AM
Never know what the renewal of spring will bring. Thank you for your participation in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Very creative way to go. Sara
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Date: 1/31/2023 12:40:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Sara
Date: 1/29/2023 9:09:00 PM
Great hoipe. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/28/2023 7:14:00 PM
Spring is when love seems to bloom the most, so there's a chance she'll find love again. This is beautiful and emotional, all at the same time. My best to you, Joseph. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 1/27/2023 1:48:00 PM
Always sad when love is one sided and its hard to move on but one should never give up on hope. Good luck in the contest Joseph. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Date: 1/27/2023 10:33:00 AM
Wonderful poem expressed in such few words.
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Date: 1/27/2023 9:41:00 AM
Hope on the outskirts!
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Date: 1/27/2023 6:08:00 AM
You told a cohesive story in just a few words in this new form. Expertly done, Joseph. No doubt a winner.
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Date: 1/27/2023 4:39:00 AM
Love the optimistic closing in this, Joseph. Good Luck in the Contest. SuZ
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Date: 1/27/2023 3:38:00 AM
very well done Joseph, perhaps love will bloom once more, I adore this
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