Love Letter Ll

"My dearest love i'm writing to you.
   as the time is approaching fast.
 My heart feels empty because your
                   not in it.
 so for now you make this letter last.
  I hate being so far from you as my
   my heart wants to be near you.
 tasting your lips of sweet red wine.
  something i need and wish to do.
Days turn lonely and nights make me
                      crazy.
missing your pretty smile exchanging
                  with mine.
soon we will be in each others arms &
i know happiness again we will find.
I have a piece of treasure i fought for
                     hard.
against the enemies that swung their
                   swords.
sneaking under the moon in quietness.
       they dared come aboard.
I hope this letter will reach you when i
can finally find a port to mail it to our
                      home.
have faith i will return and never again
              will you be alone"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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April 16, 2018 at 12:49 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, Patti - keep up the wonderful work, my friend - "A writer writes - always!"
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April 8, 2018 at 9:55 PM
Patti, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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April 8, 2018 at 7:13 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Patti. Well done.
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