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Love Letter From the Soul Xxxiii

Three, A blanket of white paints the floor pure, pristine unabridged assignments in the void footprints not yet laid and I'm a dozen moments away I look to your sky and the lights they light up the night our night, our beginning we're naked, we're pure like the fresh laid snow nothing traced, nothing known where we've been, where we go new paths lie ahead where the trade winds blow we trade snow for sand hope for hearts mountains climb us for we are the earth, the stars, the sun and the moon we are the children inside wandering about at last taking first steps wobbly but we reach out our hands for trust and for love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 12/31/2019 10:44:00 AM
This is quite beautifully expressed. Blessings for 2020.
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Ts Poetry
Date: 12/31/2019 1:09:00 PM
Thanks Rick, have a blessed 2020
Date: 12/31/2019 10:16:00 AM
There is no escaping the story you deliver. It is rather unique and brilliant and a puzzle to be worked out. And to each reader, their own story. A person who cares could not turn their back and walk away. However, please explain "Three". The other side of the mirror. M.
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Date: 12/31/2019 10:01:00 PM
https://youtu.be/BBP0B0hVXUk
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/31/2019 12:41:00 PM
https://youtu.be/OlLrn6AVV2s
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/31/2019 12:40:00 PM
Smooth Operator...Periwinkles. Goodnight Agt Schmidt. Salut. 5.40am 1/1/2020, Sydney Australia. M. x
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Ts Poetry
Date: 12/31/2019 10:33:00 AM
The third three was needed as the first two were in the title xxx
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Date: 12/31/2019 10:19:00 AM
https://youtu.be/5QbFSn4ztvs
Date: 12/31/2019 8:12:00 AM
Beautiful Tim, I can just see the people on the fresh snow your getting .. the first to step on it so pure white.. Happy New Year my friend. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/31/2019 10:33:00 AM
Happy New Year Eve and thank you for all your support.

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