Love, Left, Waiting, Maybe

Our eyes met and she told me when we’re apart it hurts
I delivered a kiss of assurance to take away the fear
Saying I love you touching her heart, whispering I’m always in here
It’s ok.  We might be parting different directions but love will find its way
Confidence in my words but I knew this would be the last day
Last day to lay with her on these carpeted floors in front of the fire place
Last day to kiss, please, taste and see her body and face
Abandoned I watched an angel take her leave
Abandoned I awaited to receive
An email
A letter
A call
I awaited to receive nothing at all
was it a lie when she told me “the words of save me”
…. Love will find its way…..maybe 
But to hell with waiting I’m moving on
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Wiggins Avatar
December 15, 2008 at 8:37 PM
It's hard to have hope when you feel so low in life and almost everyone puts you down and to them nothing you do is right... Read my poem Was I Condemned and let me know what you think... *Breana
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December 13, 2008 at 11:29 PM
I have read all your poems and your word touched me. Maybe when some of this pain go away I can write about how happy I am...maybe *Breana*
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December 13, 2008 at 9:57 PM
I like it... *Breana*
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