Love It

i love it when you hold me
tell me the cuties things
when you hold me at nigh
i feel light as a feather
when you say i love you
i turn red and hide my face
i feel so in love
words that you just say
open mind
gentle and soft
you hold my heart
the beats seem to count
no blood drips
no tears no wounds
just love flowing
head to toes
I’m bare naked half way
you touch me softly
sweat drips lift me
teach me but hold me
play ruff ones
when the nigh is blue
and the sky is clam
the moon shines 
the bed moves
i love you 
but love it 
lets do it
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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June 6, 2024 at 9:32 AM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 13, 2016 at 10:57 PM
luis, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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