Love Is the Way It Go's

When we met we were in a store
as I looked in your eyes tears started to pour

you were so beautiful I said to myself
I was so nervous I fell on a shelf

love is the word everybody knows
everybody knows love is the way it goes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mayall Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 6:58 PM
thats sweet ....good job
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March 31, 2009 at 12:01 PM
sweet i didnt know you had that side all i ever see is the goofy skater chris
Bilyeu Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 11:05 AM
welcome to poetry soup Chris and great couplet!!!
Johnson Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 3:24 PM
thats realy sweet
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March 29, 2009 at 8:09 AM
your are off to a great start chris, I'm glad to see you are taking in all the good advice on your writing. nice couplet keep up the good work!
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March 28, 2009 at 10:10 AM
Wow Chris,I really enjoyed reading this couplet nice job....and welcome to poetry soup
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March 27, 2009 at 6:11 PM
Chris, I found this to be very pleasant indeed... I know how it is with love at first sight...I Liked the rhyme...Look forward to reading more of your work...Keep sharing..I will send you some soup mail..Nice write~Welcome to the Family here.. God Bless Always, Tyesha
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March 27, 2009 at 6:05 PM
Nice couplet Chris I left you some soup mail...Raul
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March 27, 2009 at 5:03 PM
Hi Chris. Welcome to PoetrySoup. I will send you a soup mail to help you out a little bit. You are off to a great start! Love, Shar
Santiago Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 3:38 PM
Great write! I enjoyed it, but please check...was/were...and poor/pour. Thanks for sharing...and welcome to soupland! Rgds, E!
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