Love Is the Easy Part

To be "involved" can sound a little sly;
"Complicated" some one says and rolls his eye!
But I protest and politely ask                    
That "involved" be returned unto its proper task.

Involved is care
   to be aware.
   Look, listen is perceive,
   receive, immerse in some one/thing
   other than the self...
   Not just the facts, Ma'am!
Involved is feel,
   like care, only more like real;
   not just wash the idea 
   in some other kind,    
   but drink! Inhale with your diaphragm!  
Involved is hard.
   If knife to you to me is knife,
   must I also die?
   Or knife and not-knife
   both are true and
    I be I and also you...
Involved is life!
   Alone, alone is guard. Experience!
   Broaden means across a space between
   Two wheels in one track 
   is ahead/behind.
Don't sweat the clear, uncluttered
    mind. It's still okay to keep 
   the I and You in We.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 1:45 PM
I like the uniqueness of this poem and the knife metaphor. Very interesting read, Elizabeth.
Mccann Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 2:05 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I do appreciate your comment. Though this way of writing doesn't have a name, it seems to be the way my mind works to keep the emotion alive. Elizabeth
Parker Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 10:36 AM
"what the heck" is pretty intriguing piece, Miss Elizabeth. Exploring the depths. ~;o)
Mccann Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 1:39 PM
Intriguing comment! (I like the Miss Elizabeth part. It makes me feel all Southern!) Elizabeth
Wolf Avatar
November 28, 2022 at 7:30 PM
Profound musing there, Elizabeth. Aye, I, Eye and Oui, We, Wee
Mccann Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 2:41 AM
Mucho gracias, G.W. Just flyin' the flag! Liz
Volumes Avatar
November 27, 2022 at 10:10 PM
So right Elizabeth, it doesn't "just happen" Loved the way you put it. Clever and so very perceptive,
Mccann Avatar
November 28, 2022 at 5:23 PM
Thanks, Wendy! I put this one on ice for a while, couldn't work out a form. Then decided what the heck... Elizabeth
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