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Love is Mystery

He's aged and gray yet my heart still melts,
his eyes and his smile have not changed
and put butterflies within
the inmost part of me.
Love is mystery
and will escape
the greedy,
squeezing 
mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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December 21, 2023 at 1:11 PM
Congratulations on your first place in the contest
Achara Avatar
December 21, 2023 at 1:15 PM
Thank you.
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December 21, 2023 at 4:00 AM
Dear Chetta, i just love the way this flows in such a soul warming manner. It really is so touching and so very well crafted. Especially the opening line that depicts unconditional eternal love and how some love never changes despite age or time. Made my heart melt! this one really touched my soul! Thank you for sharing a sincere one and meaningful nonet. Congratulations on your well deserved placement. Wishing you beautiful holidays..
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December 21, 2023 at 12:38 PM
Thank you!
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