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He's aged and gray yet my heart still melts, his eyes and his smile have not changed and put butterflies within the inmost part of me. Love is mystery and will escape the greedy, squeezing mind.

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Date: 12/21/2023 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place in the contest
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Chetta Achara
Date: 12/21/2023 1:15:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 12/21/2023 4:00:00 AM
Dear Chetta, i just love the way this flows in such a soul warming manner. It really is so touching and so very well crafted. Especially the opening line that depicts unconditional eternal love and how some love never changes despite age or time. Made my heart melt! this one really touched my soul! Thank you for sharing a sincere one and meaningful nonet. Congratulations on your well deserved placement. Wishing you beautiful holidays..
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Chetta Achara
Date: 12/21/2023 12:38:00 PM
Thank you!

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