Love Is Blind

It all started one day
When she was down by the bay
She sat with her friends
Unknowing their friendship was about to come to an end
Because right then
She looked around the ben
And saw the boy

The Boy! Yes it was the boy
He was about to put an end to all their joy
It started with the wink of an eye
And ended with a goodbye
Because while the boy and the girl stayed together
The girls started to experience some bad weather
Because she started to date this boy

The friends tried to save her 
But she was caught in a blur
Unknowing of the mistakes she was making
She let him pressure her even though she was breaking
However she really did not care
She just needed her love there
It all happened because of the boy

She started to become distant
Acting like her friends were nonexistent
All she cared about now was him
She was drowning - she forgot how to swim
She forget how to say no
She just kept getting hit with painful blows
Because she didn’t care what he did 
- she just needed her love, no matter how many times she was hit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 10, 2016 at 11:05 PM
Snowkissed Sugar, Congratulations on your "Cliche" win. Love LINDA
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April 8, 2016 at 3:48 AM
Congrats on ur very wonderful win with this amazing write Cassie..
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March 30, 2016 at 8:20 PM
Cassie, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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