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Love Is a Roller Coaster

It takes time to climb to the very top Then it falls straight down and you gasp for air Your eyes roll back and you pray it won't stop It turns hard left mashing you in the chair Your heart skips a beat as it turns back right Then it starts a climb, your air's gone again Your heart won't settle and your bladder's tight As it turns back left and faces the wind One minute you want to stop and just quit Then the next minute you want more and more You cannot tell if you are sick or fit The one thing for sure it's never a bore You know when it's over and when it's not And most of the time you hope it won't end You learn what it's missing and what it's got Then buy a ticket and ride it again 11-8-19 Contest: Metaphor of Love Sponsor: Bobby May

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Date: 11/13/2019 6:41:00 AM
A fun poem with its ups and downs. Congrats on your win, Larry.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/13/2019 10:07:00 PM
LOL.... thanks Line
Date: 11/13/2019 5:56:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Larry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/13/2019 10:06:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 11/12/2019 7:08:00 PM
Wow amazing win! Congratulations!;)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/12/2019 9:32:00 PM
Thanks, Brenda! Congrats on your top spot!..well done!
Date: 11/12/2019 6:54:00 PM
Congratulation on your Placement! Larry!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/12/2019 9:33:00 PM
Thank you, Bobby. A challenging contest!!

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