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Love Is a Beautiful Thing

Whoever said love was a beautiful thing left out a few parts... Yea it's an amazing feeling, but it hides the monster deep in the heart..... They say If you've never felt jealousy you've never been in love.... ********! You see jealousy is the monster that shows it's face and engulf you in green despise hidden behind loving eyes that make YOU seem so heaven sent.... They make you believe that love is the most powerful thing.... There right But not for the hallmark reasons or the pictures defining love.... That's just a second in time, Right place right time, And you tell me this, you show me this and I'm supposed to think your right? GET OUT OF HERE! Love is powerful because it can drive you to do the most outrages things that shadow the monster u hide inside waiting to emerge and bring a beautiful destruction to light. So it's just easier to forget.... All the fights All the words that penetrate your mind And bring u down to micro size.... Love is a beautiful thing.... But only if you can tame your monster who seems to be multiplying and recruiting.. so now pride joins in and brings with him a sense of cocky I'm right attitude.. Rage is right around the corner listening and waiting while verbal abuse is making his way over to get in on the fun..... ARE U JOKING? Your monster is the reason you question this emotion the reason your going through motions that make you seem like a horrible person.... So let's put jealousy away and tell his new friends that he's not coming out to play... Instead,Reminisce on the moments that made love be what they told you.... Let's live in a frozen moment and extend it and see what it brings.... Cause then you can say with a smile LOVE IS A BEAUTIFUL THING.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/4/2010 8:23:00 PM
wonderful words my friend thank you [duncan]
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Date: 10/1/2010 4:15:00 PM
Welcome to Soup... looking forward o reading more of your work
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Date: 10/1/2010 11:47:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write on luv ..my fav thing... hope u will check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv..
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Date: 10/1/2010 8:16:00 AM
Ah, love. Love, Ah! I enjoy your poem. The last sentence hits the spot.
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Date: 10/1/2010 6:57:00 AM
Profound analysis ... welcome to the soup, for we all share the true love of poetry here. Drop by me anytime, you are welcome as my friend. One love
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Date: 10/1/2010 5:56:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jennifer. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2010 3:43:00 PM
powerful write, i really like your ending, enjoyed your write...P.D.
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