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Love Is a Ballad

love is eternal when it is true life has a way of teaching you showing you everything you can own leaving you all alone the whole world isn't always true showing you everything you can own it teases you into taking then leads you to the point of breaking leaving you all alone love is eternal showing you everything you can own in this world of sewn-unsewn leaving you all alone love is eternal when it is true love is eternal Sponsor Emile Pinet Jan 23, 2022 Contest Name Meditative Ballad

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/23/2022 2:51:00 PM

Hello Vie ... a nice soft explanation of the value of love - pleasure to read Vie - Lindsay

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/23/2022 8:31:00 AM

Beautiful ballad~" Love is eternal when it is true" and "when it is true love is eternal" speaks volumes while the distinct sounds of musical chords play throughout your lovely poem. Good luck in the contest! Blessings,Paulette

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/23/2022 8:13:00 AM

The key to your poem is that love must be true. Hugs. Victor

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/23/2022 6:28:00 AM

Creative contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. I was encouraged by your visit. Sara