Mystic Rose Rose Poet Ballad

Love Is a Ballad

love is eternal 
    when it is true 

life has a way of teaching you 
showing you everything you can own 
leaving you all alone   
the whole world isn't always true 

showing you everything you can own 
it  teases you into taking 
then leads you to the point of breaking 
leaving you all alone    

love is eternal 
showing you everything you can own 
in this world of sewn-unsewn 
leaving you all alone 
love is eternal  

when it is true 
love is eternal 

Sponsor	Emile Pinet     Jan 23, 2022 
Contest Name	Meditative Ballad

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Lindsay Laurie January 23, 2022 at 2:51 PM Hello Vie ... a nice soft explanation of the value of love - pleasure to read Vie - Lindsay

Paulette Calasibetta January 23, 2022 at 8:31 AM Beautiful ballad~" Love is eternal when it is true" and "when it is true love is eternal" speaks volumes while the distinct sounds of musical chords play throughout your lovely poem. Good luck in the contest! Blessings,Paulette

Victor Buhagiar January 23, 2022 at 8:13 AM The key to your poem is that love must be true. Hugs. Victor

Sara Kendrick January 23, 2022 at 6:28 AM Creative contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. I was encouraged by your visit. Sara