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Love is... Happiness, for the couple just starting out., finally getting a feel for what love is all about. Not a care in the world as long as they have each other, thinking they'd be happy as long as they're together. Love is.. Confusion, they don't know what's going on, they were once so happy but now they don't know what's wrong. The communication is failing, they seem so far apart, they are desperately trying to hold on to each others heart. Love is... Pain, because she just found out about the affair, wondering what she ever did wrong to make him not care. She cries herself to sleep and he drinks himself to sanity, nothing could heal the way they both are feeling. Love is.. Desperation, he begs her to stay, promises her he'll change for her, she believes he'll change his ways. He spends every day trying to make up for what he did, but that trust he has broken can't easily be fixed. Love is.. Anger, she can't trust him like she used to anymore. He gets mad when shes questions him so he just ignores. Both so angry and tired, they just want to give up, so that's what they do, they throw out their love. Love is.. Fear and sadness, and tears and madness, they've made a mistake and they sure as hell know it. He wishes he could make things right and take back all the pain, she just wants him back in her arms, they're going insane. They could've worked it out, what they had was real, they both are wondering how the other must feel. Love is... Real, it'll always find a way back, he showed up at her house and she took him back, they know they've learned a lesson, and they know it'll make them stronger, and they know when they are together, this will make them hold each other longer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/10/2013 7:47:00 PM
Hi, Denise, a deep approach on your fascinating first poem on the soup... This hear my friend is a sweet welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/5/2013 8:55:00 AM
Denise. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Date: 6/1/2013 7:02:00 PM
The seven stages of love wonderfully written Kim!
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Date: 5/30/2013 8:06:00 PM
Got caught looking up at your pic. You look nice and uhmm... Yes, yes the Poem. Great!
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Date: 5/30/2013 12:56:00 PM
The way of the world, times, divorce hovering around fifty percent - How did we go wrong ? Where did we lose our way ? Paper dolls, in a paper dolls play .. Once one loses trust in this flesh, their flesh, things can never be made whole no matter how much they dream ? Love is beautiful, yet amid this age this era this place, there are enemies at every turn .. Natural, or something else ? Crawling through her wheat fields, the locusts of time .. Sweet your love. Love, John
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Date: 5/30/2013 7:31:00 AM
Wow Gold, you have been generous in your description of love. Love a clothe of many colors. Well done and welcome to Poetrysoup.
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Date: 5/30/2013 3:13:00 AM
You write well and show that love can be molded into many forms.... Devotion plays a great part in what you describe here..... Welcome to the forum.... Jake
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Date: 5/30/2013 1:42:00 AM
Denise, a enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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