Love Is

L oving arms receiving back an erring child
O pen heart preparing to be reconciled
V elvet skin of new-born on a mother's breast
E verlasting hope which gives the spirit rest.


07/08/18

'What is love?' contest sponsored by Faraz Ajmal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 5:46 AM
Congratulations on your win! We had the same idea. Beautiful acrostic!
Watson Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 1:01 AM
Thank you Susan. It's fun trying to be creative!
Barden Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 8:42 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in Faraz's contest, Wendy - blessings and best wishes ... keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
Watson Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 1:02 AM
I'm honoured to receive such warm remarks, Gregory.
Haight Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 6:35 PM
Lovely thoughts in your beautiful Couplet poem as well as Acrostic, Wendy! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
Watson Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 1:03 AM
Thank you Sandra. I appreciate such kind remarks and really appreciate your excellent poetry.
Gondolf Avatar
August 9, 2018 at 10:58 AM
Beautiful thoughts on love, Wendy, congrats on your win. John
Watson Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 1:04 AM
From the romantic Meister himself this is praise indeed!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 2:59 PM
There is no connection greater than the love of a mother to protect her child. I love your beautiful entry Wendy. Congratulations on your second placement! : )
Watson Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 1:05 AM
So true, Connie or indeed a Father!
Ajmal Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 1:01 PM
It is a really nice and well written poem, certainly a joy to read, many congratulations on your wonderful 2nd position in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day
Watson Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 1:05 AM
Belated thanks Faraz. And congratulations on your speedy feedback!
Cunningham Avatar
August 8, 2018 at 2:22 AM
Well written Wendy, a lot said in four lines. Good luck. Tom
Watson Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 1:07 AM
Thank you Tom. I enjoyed reading about your home town. Nice to have fellow Brits on the forum.
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