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Love In Winter

The trees were barren, bony, bare, no single leaf to flutter there. My days were frigid, raw with frost, the balm of summer long since lost. And then a murmur, brief yet pure, your whispered loving, mild and sure— the winter's bluster; frozen, bleak, is softened as when angels speak.

[written for you, B— thank-you for softening my winter]

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Date: 4/17/2024 11:38:00 PM
A powerful paradox and hope in the harshness of winter: a whispering, loving, mild reminder that spring is near, and/or, maybe: a lover, B, to warm a chilly heart. Thanks for the hint. embraced in frozen, c
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Date: 12/1/2023 8:57:00 AM
Katharine, your poem is a stunning portrayal of love’s warmth amidst the harshness of winter, expressed with such eloquence and depth. The contrast between the cold landscape and the gentle murmur of love creates a beautiful, touching narrative that lingers in the reader’s mind. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/19/2023 8:01:00 PM
Beautiful! Short, powerful, all it takes!
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Date: 2/15/2023 12:52:00 PM
So very lovely!
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Date: 1/30/2023 6:08:00 AM
Excellent poem, Katharine. Enjoyed the sweet tenor you conveyed to B.
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