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Love In Winter

Winter has arrived, vitality was gone Everything remained silent, only wind sang Water chilled into ice, mountains bared by shine Trees lost their birds, and flowers lost their hands The temperature was lower and lower to become But the Love went warmer and warmer into flame

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Date: 12/20/2018 9:02:00 PM
Wow. Impressive. Chinese poetry has of course long history. You weighed your words well and got length of poem right. Sometimes we can find it hard to stop adding words. Best regards David in NZ
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Xuefeng Pan
Date: 2/17/2019 4:39:00 AM
Thanks David!
Date: 11/18/2018 8:10:00 PM
The emotive and evocative imagery of your beautiful verse is breathtaking, Xuefeng. Love in winter is ablaze.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Xuefeng Pan
Date: 11/19/2018 5:07:00 AM
Thank you very much indeed for your excellent comments and encouragement! Best wishes to you, Susan!

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