Love In Winter

Winter has arrived, vitality was gone
Everything remained silent, only wind sang
Water chilled into ice, mountains bared by shine
Trees lost their birds, and flowers lost their hands
The temperature was  lower and lower to become
But the Love went warmer and warmer into flame
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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December 20, 2018 at 9:02 PM
Wow. Impressive. Chinese poetry has of course long history. You weighed your words well and got length of poem right. Sometimes we can find it hard to stop adding words. Best regards David in NZ
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February 17, 2019 at 4:39 AM
Thanks David!
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November 18, 2018 at 8:10 PM
The emotive and evocative imagery of your beautiful verse is breathtaking, Xuefeng. Love in winter is ablaze.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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November 19, 2018 at 5:07 AM
Thank you very much indeed for your excellent comments and encouragement! Best wishes to you, Susan!
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