Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Love In Two

I fell asleep and took a stroll.
                           On stepping stones that won't grow old.
                            Some are smooth and on others I slide.
                         The distant ones have reflections that hide.
                     Some are past memories of loss and goodbyes.
                       I feel them all until the walk awakens to you.
                                Then I smile and see love in two.
                             

for Rosanna...

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 8, 2012 at 7:46 PM always see luv reading your words.. Michael.. those Giants were awesome.. hope they can take care of Green Bay... to text me u will need to use my other cell number: 856-904-0144... the other number is plain jane cell phone..haha.. like me these days with my beige cast .. oh.. I text all the time.. my thumb is getting a workoit with my sons so far away.. your words breathe new life into my bones..

Dinda Minardi December 4, 2011 at 8:49 AM Beautiful, you got a perfect opening here, Michael.

Andrea Dietrich November 28, 2011 at 10:24 PM A very nice reflective poem, Michael. The kind that you do best! I like how that title can have two different meanings but yours is a GOOD meaning!

Lizzie Treetop November 28, 2011 at 3:40 PM This is a really lovely poem, the memories remain but the present is what we all must appreciateand enjoy. Here's to two! X Lizzie

Robert A. Dufresne November 26, 2011 at 3:47 PM That's life ...and I can't deny it (wish this keyboard had music notations) and then it graduates one to the reality of the present as you are obviously fortunate enough to experience in this imagery loaded poem, Nice one Michael and thanks for your comment Michael J. Falotico November 26, 2011 at 4:17 PM Thanks Robert it's always nice when someone really gets another poets poem

Cory Long November 26, 2011 at 12:51 PM this was very good love how you set it up "past memories of loss and goodbye" this was awesome nicely done. Check out my poem "MY HOME" cory

Fabiyas M V November 26, 2011 at 11:23 AM Another fantastic write,Michae!I love the style of your verse.Lovinly,FAB